Posted May 19May 19 The first line is your reader's first impression. Share yours!✍️ Post:The first sentence of your storyLet others say if it’s catchy or could be strongerAlso analyze what makes others’ lines work!Fun and powerful feedback loop.
May 21May 21 Sets mood immediately (rain = cleansing, moodiness)Introduces mystery (her past?)Shows action + emotion in one line
The first line is your reader's first impression. Share yours!
✍️ Post:
The first sentence of your story
Let others say if it’s catchy or could be stronger
Also analyze what makes others’ lines work!
Fun and powerful feedback loop.