Posted Monday at 09:48 AM4 days The first line is your reader's first impression. Share yours!✍️ Post:The first sentence of your storyLet others say if it’s catchy or could be strongerAlso analyze what makes others’ lines work!Fun and powerful feedback loop.
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The first line is your reader's first impression. Share yours!
✍️ Post:
The first sentence of your story
Let others say if it’s catchy or could be stronger
Also analyze what makes others’ lines work!
Fun and powerful feedback loop.